Wednesday, April 27, 2011

when she said....


the below poem is just purely based on imagination....

"When she said …..

She said everything, and I was listening
She said everything while it was darkening

When she said, that now its no more the same
i stopped
when she said , that now every thing is in vain
I got blocked

When she said that my words are dialogue
I did not understand how it can be true

When she said that my care for her is just art
I did not understand how I can be just wheel less cart

She said many things, she clay ed many twigs

I never wanted her to be so harsh
I never wanted every black to be ash

When she said that the bonding we had is over now
When she said that chroming of metal is fake now

She said I am just like a scrap
She said I am just like unfolded wrap

By now I have learnt that I have lost her
By now I have learnt that I cannot have her

Still I am thinking about her
Still I am clicking without blur

I will never get any one like her again
She is special by all means
She is special as she can cook all meals

By all this I do not want sympathy
By all this I just want to remove apathy
For whom I wrote this will now never read it
For whom I clothed this will never see it

It will be  tough now to handle this for me
It will be tough now to cradle this bay for me

What I was till now was fake she said
What I added till now was just lake she said

She has the reasons to say this
She has the seasons to way this

Each and every word of her was apt
Each and every narration of her was fact
I do not deserve any one
I cannot reserve any one

No clue where my words are flowing today
No clue how I am spoiling the curd today

I always wanted to be good listener
But never thought to listen is so painful
She made me realised that i am no one
She made me realised that i am not only one

Just wanted to talk with her once
Just wanted to walk with her once

My script which was mine today stands alone
the drift which I wanted lands on clone



9 comments:

  1. Both the poems are NICE......
    n i dont think that they r purely based on imagination.....!!!!!

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  2. NICE....
    u knw wat diz means to me..
    nd lyk always u r ri8

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  3. kya baat hai kk......kiske liye likh rha hai ye sab...moni agreed to u it cnt b jst on imagination....peom is too gud yaar...

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  4. well champu....... uske liye likhi hai... jisse bahot darr lagta hai.....

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  5. Ya Dimpu.......
    M alwayzz Ri8 na......
    n yup poem is too gud n also true n nt based on ny imagination !!!!! ;) :P

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  6. so if its nt imagination den on whom it is based ..??? lolzzz

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  7. Well i dnt knw !!!!!!
    Obviously u knw that !!!!!B-)

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  8. You weaved thoughts beautifully, I loved the ending lines of the poem.

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